Culley applied the Page 69 Test to her new YA verse novel, The Name She Gave Me, and reported the following:
From page 69:Visit Betty Culley's website.Why would anyone live that closeThe poems in my young adult verse novel The Name She Gave Me all have titles, and this one is called "Science and Math," partly because the main character Rynn, who’s sixteen, is in a science class when she connects the science of volcanoes and their eruptions to her own home life. The teacher shows photos of the Mayon volcano in the Philippines, with wisps of smoke coming from the top of it. You can also see houses and people tending their crops right below the volcano. The volcano metaphor helps her explain to herself what it’s like to live with the unpredictable anger and ‘eruptions’ of her adoptive mother. While this knowledge is stark, it’s also a way for Rynn to make sense of and put words to the experience.
to a volcano,
someone in class
called out,
unless they had a death wish?
Good question,
Ms. Harris said.
Can you think why
that might be?
I didn’t raise my hand
but I could have answered.
I would have said,
People stay there
because the soil is fertile,
the black sand beaches
are beautiful,
and it’s the only home
they’ve ever known.
And because they hope
the last eruption was really
the last.
Or they think,
if it does erupt,
they’ll be fast enough
to outrun the ash.
If a reader opened to page 69, they would have a good idea of the whole work, because they’d hear Rynn’s voice describing a pivotal moment in her understanding of her own situation.
The Page 69 Test: Three Things I Know Are True.
--Marshal Zeringue