"Daughters"

Corinne Demas is the author of 39 books including two collections of short stories, seven novels, a memoir, a collection of poetry, two plays, and numerous books for children. She is a professor emeritus of English at Mount Holyoke College and a fiction editor of the Massachusetts Review.

She grew up in New York City, in Stuyvesant Town, the subject of her memoir, Eleven Stories High, Growing Up in Stuyvesant Town, 1948-1968. She attended Hunter College High School, graduated from Tufts University, and completed a Ph.D. in English and Comparative Literature at Columbia University. She lived in Pittsburgh for a number of years, teaching at the University of Pittsburgh and at Chatham College.

Demas applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, Daughters, with the following results:

From page 69:

Meredith hadn’t seen Wylie for several years, but even with his hair cut shorter (and by the looks of it, done by a barber rather than himself) and some grey in his mustache, he still looked like the gawky teenager who hadn’t gotten used to his newly acquired height, his arms too long for his sleeves.

“How’ve you been, Merry?” he asked.

“Not bad, and you?” She’d come out to the driveway after Wylie’s truck had pulled up. He always used to drive disreputable pickups, their bumpers plastered with so many stickers it looked as if that’s what held them together, but this was a new truck, clean enough to drive into the city.

“She prefers Meredith, now,” said Evan, then he added, “but around here, with family, she’s still Merry.”

“Do I count as family?” asked Wylie, and he gave her a smile that seemed a little sad too.

“Sure, why not?” she said. She stepped behind Eloise, put her hands on her daughter’s shoulders, and gave her a little nudge forward. “And this is Eloise.”

“Hi, Eloise,” said Wylie. “I heard about you from your uncle.”

“What did he say?”

“He said you were, let me see . . . ten years old?” He winked at Meredith.

The Page 69 Test works beautifully for Daughters. It gives readers a taste of the novel, and it’s the enticing opening page of Chapter 8 where Wylie first makes his entrance. Hints about him earlier in the novel suggest he will influence the course of the story.

Daughters centers on the relationship between Delia, a Suzuki violin teacher on the cusp of retirement, and her adult daughter, Meredith, an artist, who gave up playing the violin as a teenager, a sore point between them. Meredith has fled her home in L.A. and her marriage, and she turns up at her old home in New England—where Meredith’s mother and step-father still live--with her seven- year-old daughter, Eloise in tow.

Wylie is Meredith’s older brother Evan’s best friend, and she had a crush on him when she was younger. We suspect there might be something still going on between them. Earlier in the novel (page 16) when Eloise discovers a “good luck” rabbits foot on a key chain in her mother’s old bureau, Meredith reveals it was given to her by Wylie. Meredith “wasn’t ready to think about Wylie, but now that was impossible. She hadn’t let him know she was back, but he’d find out from Evan soon enough. And then what?”

The “then what?” is what fiction is all about. And here, on page 69, we see how things begin to unfold in Daughters.

In the chapter preceding page 69 we learn that Wylie is a controversial figure from Meredith’s past. When Delia hears that he’s coming over she “felt a little stirring of fear.” She wonders if Wylie has anything to do with Meredith’s leaving her husband, and is anxious about the possibility they could have a relationship now. One of the questions that fuels Daughters is how do mother/daughter dynamics change—or need to change- -when the daughter in question is now an adult.

Dialogue is an essential ingredient in Daughters, and page 69 is primarily dialogue. In this scene we get to witness the subtle sexual tension between Wylie and Meredith, and we also get to see Wylie meet Eloise for the first time. Wylie’s interactions with Eloise are crucial to the plot of the novel and influence whether he and Meredith have a chance for a future together. Of course we hope they do.

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"Deeper than the Ocean"

Born in Havana, Mirta Ojito is a journalist, professor, and author who has worked at the Miami Herald, El Nuevo Herald, and the New York Times. The recipient of an Emmy for the documentary Harvest of Misery as well as a shared Pulitzer for national reporting in 2001 for a series of articles about race in America for the New York Times, Ojito was an assistant professor of journalism at Columbia University for almost nine years. She is the author of two award-winning nonfiction books: Finding Mañana: A Memoir of a Cuban Exodus and Hunting Season: Immigration and Murder in an All-American Town. Currently, Ojito is a senior director on the NBC News Standards team working at Telemundo Network.

She applied the Page 69 Test to Deeper than the Ocean, her debut novel, and shared the following:

From page 69:

[My senses were on high alert as if I was covering a] protest or a revolution. I felt cold but was sweating. My mouth tasted like copper, and I realized I was chewing the inside of my cheek. I tried to bring my attention back to the phone now that I could finally hear my mother clearly.

“I was asking if you had found the place with the mulberry trees? I know what they are for,” my mother was saying.

The trees! Yes, of course. I had forgotten to google them.

“And what are they for?” I asked impatiently. It seemed somehow important, though I wasn’t sure why.

“They’re the only food silkworms eat. Apparently, they used to weave silk on the islands. Maybe that’s something to investigate, right?”

The answer both surprised and deflated me a little. Worms? Really? I was confused and my clothes were thoroughly drenched. Beyond the lobby windows, I could see the timid rays of the sun pushing through the dark clouds. The storm had passed as quickly as it had come. All was calm outside, but inside I felt strangely agitated.

Although page 69 in my book begins mid-sentence and continues for just a few more paragraphs of dialogue, the test works because it gives readers a sense of foreboding and a sense of the dynamic between two important characters. The page comes at the end of an intense and important scene in what, if the chapters were numbered, would be chapter 9.

My book is written in two voices -a contemporary one, the voice of Mara Denis, a 55-year-old freelance journalist who is searching for her family history in Spain’s Canary Islands- and that of Catalina Quintana, her elusive great grandmother who carries a secret that has haunted and altered the story of the family.

Chapter 9 is crucial because it describes the moment when Mara begins to uncover the clues that will eventually unravel the mystery of her grandmother. The scene described on page 69 gives the reader a glimpse of Mara’s relationship with her mother, and it alludes, somewhat, to her phobia of the sea. In this case, she is drenched because of a passing rainstorm, but she is agitated -a state that refers both to her reporter’s sense that she is about to discover something important (the sun pushing through the dark clouds) and to her ancestral fear of the water.

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My Book, The Movie: Deeper than the Ocean.

--Marshal Zeringue

"Scot's Eggs"

Catriona McPherson was born in Scotland and lived there until 2010, then immigrated to California where she lives on Patwin ancestral land. A former academic linguist, she now writes full-time. Her multi-award-winning and national best-selling work includes: the Dandy Gilver historical detective stories, the Last Ditch mysteries, set in California, and a strand of contemporary standalone novels including Edgar-finalist The Day She Died and Mary Higgins Clark finalist Strangers at the Gate. She is a member of Mystery Writers of America, The Crimewriters’ Association, The Society of Authors and Sisters in Crime, of which she is a former national president.

McPherson applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, Scot's Eggs, and reported the following:

From page 69:

no reason for the killer not to leave the bodies there in the car.’

‘How can she know there was no reason to—?’ I said.

‘She can’t!’ said Kathi. ‘I’m not agreeing, I’m just reporting. She’s feeling hurt and helpless and she’d rather feel hurt and like she’s doing something. If she’s willing to pay us to find her mom and pop, who are we to turn down work?’

‘What am I missing?’ I said.

‘Highlighter, contouring, a really good blow-out, a well-fitting bra . . .’ said Todd. ‘Just kidding. Not. Yeah, Kathi, what are we missing? Because everything you’ve said so far sounds like we’d be taking money under false pretences from vulnerable people and probably getting arrested for interfering with a police investigation too.’

‘Not false pretences,’ said Kathi. Then she ruined it. ‘Not exactly. What I think we should do is defer the retainer until the case is closed to the Millers’ satisfaction. They’re going to think that means finding their mom and pop alive and well and rebuilding their iron levels on a tropical island. We know it means giving them proof that their parents are dead, even if it’s the cops who take over and work out whodunnit. I can live with that.’

‘But what makes you think we can do either quicker and better than Molly?’ I said.

‘For one thing, we’ll be trying,’ Kathi said. She held up a hand as I started to interrupt her. ‘I’m not saying Molly won’t be trying to solve the case; I’m sure she will, but she’ll be working for the deceased, the state, and her own promotion prospects. Not the kids. They’re orphaned in more ways than one.’

‘Like DC,’ I said. ‘Gotcha.’

‘What?’ said Kathi. ‘DC . . . Universe, you mean?’

‘If only she did,’ said Todd.

Page 69 strikes again! I think it's fair to say that anyone who's completely uninterested and unentertained by this page from Scot's Eggs probably wouldn't get much from the book as a whole. The page opens in the middle of one point and ends in the middle of another, but the people on page 69 are central to the series and we find them very much doing what they tend to do. There are two running jokes represented here too and a nod to an important recurrent character.

Trinity for Trouble is the PI wing of a complex joint business venture that also includes Trinity for You (make-overs), Trinity for Home (de-cluttering) and Trinity for Life (counselling). Todd, Kathi and Lexy (the narrator) do a lot of bickering as they solve crimes so the conversation they're having here is typical. Molly, referenced in this particular bicker-fest, is a detective in the local PD and one of my favourite characters outside the Last Ditch crew themselves.

One of the running jokes started in book one (when Todd caught sight of Lexy's knicker drawer and disapproved of her penchant for comfortable cotton) and will carry on as long as the series does. Scot's Eggs is book eight. The other running joke is Eggs-specific. In this novel, Lexy is studying for her US citizenship test, which includes learning the constitution. Much to the exasperation of her friends she finds shoe-horning in allusions to the amendments - here it's the twenty-third - is the best way to cement them in her memory. I had a lot of fun getting an amendment Easter egg into every chapter. This was one of the longer reaches. Some of them were just sitting there.

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--Marshal Zeringue

"Miss Winter in the Library with a Knife"

Martin Edwards has been described by Richard Osman as "a true master of British crime writing." His novels include the eight Lake District Mysteries and four books featuring Rachel Savernake, including the Dagger-nominated The Puzzle of Blackstone Lodge. He is also the author of two multi-award-winning histories of crime fiction, The Life of Crime and The Golden Age of Murder. He has received three Daggers, including the CWA Diamond Dagger (the highest honour in UK crime writing) and two Edgars from the Mystery Writers of America. He has received four lifetime achievement awards: for his fiction, short fiction, non-fiction, and scholarship. He is consultant to the British Library’s Crime Classics and since 2015 has been President of the Detection Club.

Edwards applied the Page 69 Test to his newest novel, Miss Winter in the Library with a Knife, and reported the following:

Of the 24 crime novels I’ve written, Miss Winter in the Library with a Knife is the trickiest when it comes to applying the Page 69 Test. In fact, it’s the trickiest book I’ve ever written in a variety of ways – above all, because it’s a novel about game-playing, which is garnished with puzzles. The idea was to create a twisty contemporary mystery novel in the finest Golden Age traditions, with a small group of guests and their hosts cut off from the outside world by snow in the village of Midwinter at Christmas. The book has an interactive element, so that readers can play along if they want to. They can do this in one or more of three ways. First, by following the Rules of the Game at the start of the book and trying to solve the main mystery; they can also check out how many clues they spotted because there’s a Cluefinder with page references (as they are in my Rachel Savernake historical mysteries). Second, by trying to solve the game that the six main characters are competing to win, a challenge set them by the mysterious Midwinter Trust. Third, by solving the incidental puzzles that are found in the first half of the book - before the body count in the village of Midwinter starts to rise.

With so much going on, no single page can capture every aspect of the story. Page 69 forms part of the main story – and I was always determined to make sure that, regardless of all the interactive ingredients of the book, it had to be a good read as a novel. On page 69 there’s a conversation between two of the key characters at Midwinter, Harry Crystal, a failed crime writer, and Baz Frederick, a podcaster. All the guests are connected with the publishing business and all have fallen on hard times. There are a lot of jokes about books and the world of writing. On page 69, there is a sense of fun and also danger, and that captures the spirit of Miss Winter in the Library with a Knife.

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--Marshal Zeringue

"Hear Her Howl"

Kim DeRose writes dark, magical stories about strong, magical girls for teens and former teens.

She is the author of Hear Her Howl and For Girls Who Walk Through Fire, which was selected for ALA’s 2025 Rise: A Feminist Book Project List, received a starred review from School Library Journal, praise from Kirkus Reviews and Booklist, and was the recipient of the 2024 Millikin Medal for Excellence in Young Adult Fiction.

She grew up in Santa Barbara, California, earned her MFA in film directing from UCLA, and currently lives in Brooklyn, NY as a recovering Catholic and ex-good girl.

DeRose applied the Page 69 Test to Hear Her Howl with the following results:

I was familiar with this test, having done it for my debut, For Girls Who Walk Through Fire, but it was really interesting to once again do it for Hear Her Howl.

On page 69 we are with our main character, Rue Holloway (who has been sent away by her mother to an all-girl’s Catholic boarding school for kissing another girl) and Charlotte Savage (the school’s rebellious outcast, who is Rue’s semi-foe but soon-to-be love interest) as they are approached by Mother Superior. Rue has secretly acted out, and the school has blamed Charlotte, and in this moment we discover whether or not Rue is going to fess up and clear Charlotte’s name.

While this scene doesn’t tell you the full story of Hear Her Howl (for example, we have no idea about why Rue has been sent away, or the book's speculative element, i.e. that the girls within this book are reclaiming their wild and can or will turn into wolves), what it does reveal is a pivotal turning point between Rue and Charlotte - and their relationship is central to the book. It also establishes the strict system that they are both operating within, in the form of Mother Superior. And, without giving any plot points away, this page also leaves us with a big question about how things are going to move forward between Rue and Charlotte.

Visit Kim DeRose's website.

Q&A with Kim DeRose.

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--Marshal Zeringue

"Deadly Trade"

Sara Driscoll is the pen name of Jen J. Danna, coauthor of the Abbott and Lowell Forensic Mysteries and author of the FBI K-9 Mysteries and NYPD Negotiators series. After over 30 years in infectious diseases research, Danna hung up her lab coat to concentrate on her real love—writing “exceptional” thrillers (Publishers Weekly). She is a member of the Crime Writers of Canada and lives with her husband and four rescued cats outside of Toronto, Ontario.

She applied the Page 69 Test to her latest FBI K-9s novel, Deadly Trade, and shared the following:

From page 69:

“How fast will it work?”

“Within a couple of minutes. Once I’m sure it’s stopped, I’ll hydrate and bag this one.”

Todd walked back to the circle of the clearing. “Meg called it, then? We’re looking at wildlife trafficking?”

“Definitely,” Byrne agreed. “And it’s not the first we’ve seen of it here.”

“Most people think of wildlife trafficking as the trade in animal parts,” said Hale. “Rhinoceros horns, shark fins, bear gallbladders. Many of these animal parts are used in Eastern medicine or are considered delicacies. But what happens is animals are killed, or worse, stripped of those parts and left to die a slow and agonizing death. We don’t have as much of that happening here because we’re a remote archipelago. Our wildlife either flew, swam, or were brought here as an invasive species. We don’t have the kind of desirable land mammals a lot of wildlife trafficking revolves around. We don’t have pangolins, rhinoceroses, or elephants. We do, however, have seahorses and endangered sea turtles. Then there’s the birds.”

“They’re trafficking the birds for parts?” Meg asked.

“It’s not all about parts of animals.” Hale came to stand behind Byrne, his eyes on her hands. “There are streams of wildlife trafficking. Some animals are used as food delicacies—shark fin soup, pangolin meat, or eels as unagi, a celebratory treat that’s supposed to increase stamina. Some are used in medicine—bear gallbladders, seahorses, and pangolin scales, bones, and heads.”

“Sounds like it’s unlucky to be a pangolin,” Todd murmured.

“It’s why they’re nearly extinct.” Byrne’s tone was scathing. “It’s a tragedy. And their value is incredibly overblown. There’s no scientific evidence it’s effective medicine, yet they continue to die.”

Deadly Trade passes the Page 69 Test with flying colors as it strikes at the heart of the novel—wildlife trafficking.

Meg Jennings and her new husband Todd Webb are on their Hawaiian honeymoon with Meg’s search-and-rescue canine, Hawk. Their first week is spent in relaxed seclusion on Lanai, but then they fly to the Big Island to delve into the island’s natural beauty and to start working out so they don’t lose their edge as a K-9 team or firefighter, respectively. But trouble always seems to find them, and in the middle of a remote fern forest on the eastern slope of Mauna Loa, Hawk alerts to something alarming. Not able to ignore the alert in case Hawk is sensing someone in trouble, they investigate and find themselves coming face-to-face with wildlife traffickers attempting to capture and bag endangered birds for a buyer on the black market.

Local FBI and US Fish and Wildlife agents are called in after the traffickers scatter, and while the wildlife agent works to rehydrate and stabilize injured birds, the teams discuss the issue of wildlife trafficking in Hawaii. This is where we are on page 69, as Special Agent Jeremy Hale, an agent of Hawaiian descent out of the Honolulu field office, explains wildlife trafficking as the world knows it. He then goes on to describe the trade in exotic birds, the rarer the better. Hawaii is the extinction capitol of the world and is a target for bad actors who dabble in the capture of extremely endangered species, selling the creatures to the highest bidder, lining their pockets while pushing species ever closer to extinction.

Sadly, this is not a fictitious issue. Real species are under threat not only from loss of habitat and climate change, but from wildlife traffickers looking to make sky-high profits no matter the cost. Deadly Trade is an exciting thriller, but it also offers a glimpse into a horrifying, all-too- real ongoing crisis alongside the hope given by those who fight against it.

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"The Ganymedan"

Originally from Nigeria, R.T. Ester moved to the United States in 1998 and, catching the creative bug early on, studied art with a focus on design. While working full time as a graphic designer, he began to write speculative fiction in his spare time and, since then, has had stories published in Interzone and Clarkesworld.

Ester applied the Page 69 Test to his new novel, The Ganymedan, and reported the following:

From page 69:

The guide was saying something about the protein manufacturer that owned most of the factory buildings. Minutes elapsed while he prattled parrot-like in V-Dot’s ear. They zipped past water towers and power plants, past new housing developments erected shoddily over what had been public parks, past storage facilities, shops with heavy foot traffic in and out of them, hospital buildings, train stations with long lines of passengers waiting to board.

They passed between a row of spokes reaching like monoliths toward the hub. The guide waved back at children inside a lift car going up a spoke. A beamcar overtook them. Then another. V-Dot began to plot his escape from this one.

This is a passage from page 69 of the paperback copy of The Ganymedan, and I would say it paints a good picture of the wider work, but only in broad strokes. On its own, it maybe gives the impression that the story's antagonist might be a protein manufacturer, which at least sounds like something the actual antagonist may have controlled through an investment company. The lift car in a spoke and the mention of a 'beamcar' will probably drive away anyone in the science fiction aisle by accident, so I think it succeeds as well.

In a way, The Ganymedan is about people plotting their escape from all kinds of vehicles. V-Dot has his own method, and the contrast between how he goes about it and how other characters he encounters find their own escape is something I tried to explore here and there.

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--Marshal Zeringue

"The Tarot Reader"

Finley Turner is a thriller writer. Initially convinced she wanted to be a professor, she got her master's in religious studies at Wake Forest University, focusing on new religious movements, cults, and religious violence. During her program, she applied for a student position in the university library and quickly realized she would rather be an academic librarian than be at the front of a classroom teaching. She worked as an archivist at Wake Forest University for six years after getting her master's in library and information science from UNC Greensboro. She now writes and parents full time.

Turner applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, The Tarot Reader, with the following results:

On page 69 of The Tarot Reader, our main character Jade is being questioned by the police regarding her phony tip to the police:

My patience was wearing thin. “Like I said, it’s hard to keep track.” The silence in the room was stifling and it was becoming clear that at least Woolridge found my tip suspicious. “Have you found any more information about the councilman?”

“We’re not at liberty to say just yet,” McCade said.

“Well, I hope he’s found safe and sound.”

“But only if he’s found exactly where you said he’d be,” Woolridge said low and fast.

“Excuse me?”

McCade glared at him before he stuck his hand out to me. His palms were dry and rough against my clammy, nervous skin. “Thank you for your time.”

Detective Woolridge didn’t bother shaking my hand and was already walking to the door. He looked up at the shop’s sign above the door frame. “Nice speaking with you Madame Ravencroft,” he said with derision.

“You too, Detective Woodruff,” I said back, a wide, insincere smile on my face. He let out a nearly silent huff, the kind that tilts your chin up and back. I took pleasure in the fact that it doubled his chin, when he clearly cared enough about his appearance to spend hours in the gym.

They glanced at each other and walked out of the shop. My heart raced with pride in myself for jabbing back at him—making him feel he was insignificant enough that not even his name was worth remembering. When they were out of view of the shop window and I sat, my heart rate slowed, regret and embarrassment twisting their fists around my heart.

Why did I say that? What is wrong with me?

The detectives didn’t actively accuse me of anything, but Woolridge made it more than clear he held no respect for me nor my profession. The last thing I needed was to sharpen that derision into action, his dislike for me driving him to pin something on me.

I lowered my forehead on the tarot table where my cards lay scattered. As I sat there with my eyes closed, I wished I’d never submitted the tip at all.

The Tarot Reader passes the Page 69 Test with flying colors, with some caveats. In one sense it’s successful because we’re thrown right into the crux of the book: Jade, our phony psychic, doesn’t think before she acts and never considered the fact that her phony tip might look suspicious to the police. And of course, it has. Jade is a reactionary woman, raised by her parents to be cunning but rash. She’s a good person at her core, but all she’s ever known is to scam and bark at those who get in her way. She knows it’s not how she wants to behave, but she just can’t seem to change, so she often gives into the temptation of behaving badly.

The only shortfall of this test may be that the reader would expect the police investigation to be at the forefront of the entire novel. It provides a sense of urgency and panic, but in my opinion, the most stressful aspect of this book is wanting your main characters to not get caught in their lies and perhaps just once consider telling the truth.

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--Marshal Zeringue

"When We Talk to the Dead"

Ian Chorão is a writer and psychotherapist in private practice in Brooklyn, New York. He lives with his wife, who is a filmmaker and professor; they have two children.

Chorão's new novel, When We Talk to the Dead, is his first book of horror.

Like his main character, Chorão appreciates that the space between feeling and creation, reality and imagination is often ambiguous at best.

He applied the Page 69 Test to When We Talk to the Dead and shared the following:

A group of friends, college sophomores, on a bus. Sally, our main character, Maeve, her best friend, Omisha and her boyfriend, Marcus. They’ve just watched a disturbing video Sally has posted on her YouTube channel.

“Maeve is back on the video, scrolling, freezing on the deranged figure lunging at the camera, face blurred with movement, covered in filth and hair, vicious, feral, mouth open like an attack dog.”

Maeve is deeply upset by how disturbing the video is (not on this page, the film is Sally being attacked and killed by a feral human). Omisha and Marcus laugh it off—they’re more concerned with being alone with each other. Maeve knows the film isn’t literally real, but she wants Sally to assure her it isn’t real, in emotional terms.

Sally plays it off, but Maeve’s genuine upset allows Sally to recognize how disturbed the video she made is, and she begins to wonder.

“Looking at the frozen image, Sally thinks, I made this, so whatever it is is real. But what is it? Like a flame or a wave, it is there, but trying to catch hold, it dissolves out of reach.”

This test is wild: you get so much! Obviously, all the plot isn’t on a single page (they are going to a long-deserted island where Sally lived until she was 6 when her family experienced a horrific tragedy) but you’re very much inside the emotional action propelling the story. And all the interpersonal dynamics, which will cause intense strife on the island, are right there. Also there: how much Sally is part of the group, but how much her past and hidden inner turmoil set her apart.

It was surprising to see how much can be there on a single page. The page ends with everyone laughing at Maeve for being so dramatic. Deep down, Sally knows her friend has intuited something that's cause for genuine concern. But Sally joins in laughing kindheartedly at Maeve, underscoring a major theme of the book, the tension between wanting to be seen vs. the desire to hide from what's genuinely upsetting.

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--Marshal Zeringue

"The Irish Goodbye"

Heather Aimee O’Neill is the author of two poetry collections: Memory Future (winner of the University of Southern California’s Gold Line Press Award) and Obliterations (co-authored with Jessica Piazza, published by Red Hen).

The Irish Goodbye is her debut novel.

As a developmental editor and assistant director of the Sackett Street Writers’ Workshop, O’Neill has worked with hundreds of writers who have gone on to publish with major publishing houses.

She lives in Bed-Stuy, Brooklyn, with her beautiful wife, two sons, and—she hopes, one day—a dog.

O’Neill applied the Page 69 Test to The Irish Goodbye and reported the following:

Though I’m familiar with this exercise, I hadn’t tried it with my own book, so it was exciting to see where it took me. Page 69 of The Irish Goodbye places the reader in the middle of a scene between Maggie, the youngest sister, and Cait, the oldest sister. They’re at a pizzeria waiting to pick up the family’s dinner and having a discussion that, in many ways, epitomizes what’s wrong with the family: no one is speaking honestly.

On the surface, the conversation is about their deeply religious mother’s reaction to Maggie bringing home her girlfriend, Isabel. But Maggie isn’t revealing the true source of her anxiety about the weekend, and while Cait pretends to listen to her sister, she’s actually preoccupied with thoughts of Luke, her first love and the real reason she’s returned home after five years.

Removing one’s mask and showing up as real and vulnerable with the people who supposedly know you best is a major theme in the book, and I think this scene captures it in a quick snapshot. Plus, what’s about to happen on the next few pages change not only the course of the weekend, but the entire family’s dynamic—so you could say that this scene sets up the story’s primary catalyst.

Visit Heather Aimee O'Neill's website.

My Book, The Movie: The Irish Goodbye.

--Marshal Zeringue

"I'll Follow You"

Charlene Wang was born in Beijing and, after immigrating to the US when she was three, has lived in seven different cities from Los Angeles to Rockville to Biloxi. Graduating with a B.A. in English from Dartmouth College and a J.D. from University of Virginia School of Law, she worked as a litigator for six years. She participated in Catapult’s Novel Generator workshop. She now lives in Brooklyn, NY, with her fiancé and their dog Winky.

Wang applied the Page 69 Test to I'll Follow You, her debut novel, with the following results:

When I agreed to do the Page 69 Test, I’d just gotten a stack of ARCs — advanced reader copies, which are usually pretty damn close to the final version of the book. Flipping to page 69, I felt a mixture of relief and vindication that there was plenty to talk about. The main conflict was there, between my protagonist Faith and her best friend from home, Kayla, who ghosts her after Faith is accepted into an elite college. There were playful nods to the dark academia subgenre, with Faith walking to her art conservation class while listening to a podcast on Donna Tartt. And there was a deepening sense of mystery and wonder, as Faith steps into the Observatory for the first time, and descends down the stairs to the drift of voices, the smell of turpentine and old canvas.

Then the final hardcovers arrived a few weeks later, and my page 69 had… moved. What had once been page 69 - my page 69; the perfect encapsulation of my themes - was now page 71.

Authors are often asked how similar they are to their characters. It occurred to me, during this mini-existential crisis, that I was more similar to Faith than I’d thought: no matter how arbitrary the test, we wanted to pass with flying colors.

Maybe that’s the point of the Page 69 Test — not the page itself, but what we as authors hope it reveals. Of course, browsers in a bookstore won’t know any of that. What they’ll see on the actual page 69 is a conversation between Faith and her supervisor, a junior named Regina, at the dining hall about rushing sororities. The dialogue is snappy, lighthearted, but Regina is also pulling at the threads of Faith’s reinvention yarn. Faith wants to be accepted, to be seen in a certain light.

Sounds like someone I know.

Visit Charlene Wang's website.

--Marshal Zeringue

"Vicious Cycle"

Jaime Parker Stickle is a writer, actor, podcaster, and professor of film and television at Montclair State University. She’s also the creator and host of the true crime investigative podcast The Girl with the Same Name, as well as the hilarious podcast about side hustles, Make That Paper. Stickle lives in Los Angeles with her husband, son, and fur babies.

She applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, Vicious Cycle, and shared the following:

This is fun! Reading page 69 out of context was so enjoyable! It drops you right into the brain of our protagonist Corey. I think the test absolutely works. Corey is a brand new mom suffering from mental health issues, postpartum anxiety and panic attacks. She is a former investigative reporter turned spin instructor who finds herself in the middle of a murder investigation.

No one is better at compartmentalizing jobs, people, and her own will, then Corey and we get a good glimpse of that from the interior of Corey’s brain on page 69.

The page jumps from the memory of an old story she covered about a Peeping Tom, to lying to her husband about where she’s going, to the site of a murder. It moves compulsively and that is the definition of Corey.

“Peeping Toms are just junior murderers and rapists. It’s a natural evolution from voyeurism to break-ins. Peeping is a test to see how far a perpetrator can push into someone’s personal space. I can evolve too.”

I want to give a few snaps for Corey here. Her bold call out and identification of a problem that can be often overlooked—the growth of a perpetrator!

Additionally, there is a strong sense of place, which was incredibly important to me in writing the book. The setting of Vicious Cycle is a character in the book and on page 69 we get the iconic the Northeast LA craftsmen homes, the Dodgers, and Debs Park—all three elements are iconic Northeast LA.

I love this test!

Visit Jaime Parker Stickle's website.

My Book, The Movie: Vicious Cycle.

--Marshal Zeringue

"O, Deadly Night"

Vicki Delany is one of Canada’s most prolific and varied crime writers and a national bestseller in the U.S. She has written more than forty books: clever cozies to Gothic thrillers to gritty police procedurals, to historical fiction and novellas for adult literacy. She is currently writing four cozy mystery series: the Tea by the Sea mysteries for Kensington, the Sherlock Holmes Bookshop series for Crooked Lane Books, the Catskill Resort mysteries for Penguin Random House, and the Lighthouse Library series (as Eva Gates) for Crooked Lane.

Delany is a past president of the Crime Writers of Canada and co-founder and organizer of the Women Killing It Crime Writing Festival. Her work has been nominated for the Derringer, the Bony Blithe, the Ontario Library Association Golden Oak, and the Arthur Ellis Awards. She is the recipient of the 2019 Derrick Murdoch Award for contributions to Canadian crime writing. Delany lives in Prince Edward County, Ontario.

Delany applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, O, Deadly Night: A Year-Round Christmas Mystery, and reported the following:

From page 69:

“Okay, but one thing before we continue. When Doug called 911, he was told the police might be delayed in getting to us, as they were responding to a major incident. Anything to do with what happened to us? To Mrs. D’Angelo?”

“No. A child had gone missing. Walked out of her house in nothing but her diaper and a T-shirt into the snow. I’m happy to report she was found in the neighbor’s doghouse. Being kept warm by the dog.”

Detective Simmonds gave Mattie a fond smile.

“Good animals, dogs,” Alan said.

“Yes.” She cleared her throat. “At any time, Merry, did you see the people who moved in across the street well enough to identify them?

“Never. I wasn’t home when they initially moved in, and after that, they, or he or she, drove into the garage, and the doors shut behind them. I only know that based on tire tracks on the driveway and lack of footprints outside. Once or twice I saw someone lingering outside the house, as though they were watching it, but they didn’t stay long, and I simply assumed they were just curious. In the same way Mrs. D’Angelo was.”

“Anything noticeable about these observers?”

I shook my head. “It’s wintertime, and everyone is well bundled up. I might have seen a man once, maybe slightly on the bulky side, but I didn’t notice anything you’d call identifying about him. Might even have been a tall, overweight woman in a big coat. I have no reason to believe he wasn’t enjoying a breath of fresh night air.” I shrugged. “It’s December in Rudolph. I don’t have enough time in a day to attend to my own business, much less pay attention to anyone else’s.

O Deadly Night, passes the Page 69 Test with flying colours. As regards the plot, or the mystery the book is about, we get a good glimpse that something is wrong. New people have moved into the neighbourhood and something is ‘odd’ about them. They seem to come and go without wanting to be seen, and certainly without wanting any contact with their new neighbours. In addition, we find that someone might be ‘lingering’ in the area, watching the house in question. Might they be up to no good? And why are the new neighbours being so secretive?

But, as Merry Wilkinson points out, this is really none of her business. The reader is left to assume that it soon will be!

As this is a cozy mystery a glimpse of the lighter side for which the series is known, is provided by the very brief story of the lost child being saved by a dog. And we can all cheer for dogs!

Little in the way of description or atmosphere is provided on page 69, just enough that we know it’s coming up to Christmas in Christmas Town and the missing child walked into the snow.

Visit Vicki Delany's website, and follow her on Facebook, Instagram, and Threads.

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The Page 69 Test: The Game is a Footnote.

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The Page 69 Test: The Incident of the Book in the Nighttime.

Writers Read: Vicki Delany (July 2025).

The Page 69 Test: Tea with Jam & Dread.

Writers Read: Vicki Delany.

--Marshal Zeringue

"The Last Spirits of Manhattan"

John A. McDermott was born and raised in Madison, Wisconsin. He now serves on the board of directors for the Writers’ League of Texas and teaches creative writing at Stephen F. Austin State University. Prior to teaching, he worked as an actor, bartender, house painter, and advertising copywriter. He lives in Nacogdoches with his wife and teenage daughter.

McDermott applied the Page 69 Test to The Last Spirits of Manhattan, his first novel, with the following results:

Page 69 of my novel has my protagonist, Carolyn Banks, a young woman who’s run away to Manhattan from Wisconsin to avoid an unattractive marriage proposal, and Pete Donoff, a young man who works in an advertising agency, decorating an old house for a haunted party thrown by Alfred Hitchcock. We find Carolyn reading, for the first time, the cocktail menu for the evening, a series of campy-scary drinks and hors d’oeuvres, which Pete and his colleagues have composed. The scene is flirty and hints at Pete and Carolyn’s growing attachment and also the expectations for the party—a little spooky, a lot tongue-in-cheek, as you’d expect from a guy like Hitchcock. The menu is presented in an alternative font, so readers get a sense of the actual menu.

Here the Page 69 Test works like a meat thermometer. Poking into page 69 of this novel, readers find a lighter romantic comedy moment. It’s reflective of one aspect of the novel, but certainly not the whole. If a reader enjoyed this page, they’re going to find some threads of the novel to their liking—the humor, the romance, maybe even the fun of that alternate font. (I love odd textual elements—the novel includes telegrams, a newspaper ad, and screenplay pages to shake things up). But if you poked the thermometer in a different spot, you could jab some scarier passages with a ghost or two, a more serious conversation between spouses, or a screwball ensemble piece. (Maybe my analogy just broke—are these spots hotter or colder? I guess that’s up to the reader!) I’d never heard of the Page 69 Test but now I sort of love it. Maybe it’s like the blindfolded men touching the elephant—you’re going to find a spot that belongs to the novel, but it's the parts that make up the whole.

It might be an effect of having a novel with varied elements—is it historical? Magic realism? Comedy? Romance? Horror?—that makes page 69 a good snapshot of one or two aspects, but not every element. I do think page 69 will make a reader ponder what they’d order off that menu!

Visit John A. McDermott's website.

Q&A with John A. McDermott.

--Marshal Zeringue

"Leave No Trace"

Randee Dawn is a Brooklyn-based author and journalist who writes speculative fiction at night and entertainment and lifestyle stories during the day for publications like the New York Times, NBCNews.com, Variety, The Los Angeles Times, and Emmy Magazine. Her debut novel, Tune in Tomorrow, was published by Solaris. Publishers Weekly said of Tune in Tomorrow: "Dawn balances over-the-top drama and comedy with genuine intrigue to create a fun story with plenty of heart." Lightspeed praised it as "an excellent read if you're looking for something to make you smile... well worth your time."

Dawn applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, Leave No Trace, and shared the following:

If browsers open Leave No Trace to page 69, would they get a good (or an inaccurate) idea of the whole work?

Indirectly – yes. On page 69 we see one of the first collisions of the magical creature known as the Ghillie Dhu (the Green Man of the Forest in Scottish folklore); the human Lexi, who's grown up in the forests in the Rocky Mountains; and Stef, a songwriter who's come to the forest with her best friend, the spoiled pop star T.J. We also get a quick glimpse into the past of T.J.'s manager Tony, who has killed fae when he was in the military, and a sense that all humans have magic within them.

The page is surprisingly on point! It distills many, though not all, of the themes, characters, and issues all colliding in the book. The main story is about Lexi, Stef, and Tony – each of whom has a point of view in the novel – but they're all on their own journeys. There's a war going on between fae and humans over in Europe, and thanks to some of Tony's actions, it starts to come home to the States. Everyone has divided loyalties – will Lexi side with her best friend "Gil"? Will she bow to her paranoid father's fear of anything magic? And now that she's turning 18, what is it she wants from her own life? Meanwhile, several other characters are starting to learn about the specific magic they carry inside – and why the fae may want to use it for their own purposes.

There's also a big goddess bear in this story, Artio, who comes out of Irish folklore. She's also a forest protector, but I've given her an extra task: she can house souls. This works out well for some and not so much for others, but it means that while she was initially among the hunted in the forest, she can provide salvation for someone like Tony who has completely, utterly, messed up the biggest job he was ever given. Leave No Trace travels a lot of forest paths. Some go nowhere, and some go on forever. But it suggests you ask yourself: What would you do in this position? Would you side with magical interlopers? Or would you want the world to remain as it always has? And what would you do – if the bear chose you?

Visit Randee Dawn's website.

The Page 69 Test: Tune in Tomorrow.

Q&A with Randee Dawn.

My Book, The Movie: Tune in Tomorrow.

Writers Read: Randee Dawn.

My Book, The Movie: Leave No Trace.

--Marshal Zeringue

"Dying Cry"

Margaret Mizushima writes the award-winning Timber Creek K-9 Mysteries. She served as a past president of the Rocky Mountain Chapter of Mystery Writers of America and was elected Writer of the Year by Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. She is the recipient of a Colorado Authors League Award, a Benjamin Franklin Book Award, a CIBA CLUE Award, and two Willa Literary Awards by Women Writing the West. Her books have been finalists for a SPUR Award by Western Writers of America, a Killer Nashville Silver Falchion Award, and the Colorado Book Award. She and her husband recently moved from Colorado, where they raised two daughters and a multitude of animals, to a home in the Pacific Northwest.

Mizushima applied the Page 69 Test to her new book, Dying Cry, and reported the following:

From page 69:

After settling Robo with Brody, Mattie followed Stella to the table she’d noticed earlier where a man and two women were seated. These three were the only people who’d been at this morning’s team meeting with Tom. The man stood as they approached, folding his napkin and placing it on the table.

“Mr. Joel Taylor?” Stella said, offering a handshake.

“Yes,” Joel said as he shook hands. He was a good-looking man, maybe in his forties, with light brown hair trimmed short, a firm jaw, and an athletic physique. “You must be Detective LoSasso.”

“That’s right. I understand that you’re president of the main bank in Hightower,” Stella said, referring to a town about a half hour from Timber Creek. Since Tom had been manager of the local branch in Timber Creek, this man would be his boss. Stella turned to Mattie. “And this is Deputy Mattie Walker.”

He gave Mattie a firm handshake.

Stella turned her attention to the two women who had remained seated. “And are you the other two employees who were at the bankers’ retreat today?”

The elder of the two replied. “We are. I’m Elma Strickland, the bank’s vice president.” As she offered a fingertip handshake, she studied first Stella and then Mattie.

Elma appeared to be in her fifties, her brunette hair bearing dramatic sweeps of gray at the temples and graying strands throughout. Her skin appeared soft and without wrinkles, though her cheeks were rosy, likely

Page 69 is a good indicator of one of the roles protagonist Mattie Walker plays during the investigation of a crime in the rural mountain community of Timber Creek, Colorado. Mattie’s major role is that of K-9 handler for her German shepherd partner Robo, but when not searching for evidence or tracking down fugitives, Mattie will often assist Detective Stella LoSasso with witness interviews and suspect interrogations. The two work together along with other personnel from the Timber Creek County Sheriff’s Department to investigate crimes. And of course, Mattie’s K-9 partner Robo and her veterinarian husband Cole Walker also play a role in helping to solve each case.

In Dying Cry, Deputy Mattie Walker and her family are snowshoeing in a remote area when a shattering cry pierces the air, dying slowly as it echoes off canyon walls. Further investigation reveals a suspicious death, and the Timber Creek County Sheriff’s team springs into action, uncovering a trail of greed that leads to a killer who threatens Mattie’s cherished new family and tests her with the most difficult task she’s faced in her duty as a K-9 handler. 

Other scenes in the book depict Colorado’s snowy high country and plenty of outdoor action as Mattie and Robo try to track down a killer. If you like the outdoors, dogs, and whodunits, you might enjoy the Timber Creek K-9 Mysteries. Dying Cry is book ten in the series.

Visit Margaret Mizushima's website and follow her on Facebook, Instagram, and Threads.

Coffee with a Canine: Margaret Mizushima & Hannah, Bertie, Lily and Tess.

Coffee with a Canine: Margaret Mizushima & Hannah.

My Book, The Movie: Burning Ridge.

The Page 69 Test: Burning Ridge.

The Page 69 Test: Tracking Game.

My Book, The Movie: Hanging Falls.

The Page 69 Test: Hanging Falls.

Q&A with Margaret Mizushima.

The Page 69 Test: Striking Range.

The Page 69 Test: Standing Dead.

The Page 69 Test: Gathering Mist.

Writers Read: Margaret Mizushima (October 2024).

--Marshal Zeringue

"Hole in the Sky"

Daniel H. Wilson is a Cherokee citizen and the multiple New York Times bestselling author of techno-thrillers such as Robopocalypse, The Clockwork Dynasty, and The Andromeda Evolution (an authorized sequel to the Crichton classic). He earned a PhD in Robotics from Carnegie Mellon University, as well as Masters degrees in Machine Learning and Robotics. Wilson lives in Portland, Oregon.

He applied the Page 69 Test to his new novel, Hole in the Sky, with the following results:

From page 69:

I slow the car when I see the sign for NASA Johnson Space Center. I’m a little bit late, but that’s not such a bad thing. It’s better to give my escort some time to get inside and make an impression before I arrive.

Stopping at a security gate, I flash my badge to an armed, uniformed soldier manning the entrance. A dismayed federal marshal in a NASA security guard outfit sits next to him, looking dazed. The Army soldier is one of ours, sent ahead.

Page 69 of Hole in the Sky is the first page of the chapter called "Mission Control" — when two of my main characters meet for the first time. Gavin, the CIA weapons analyst, has been sent to investigate Mikayla, a NASA astrophysicist who has made contact with a strange object floating at the edge of our solar system.

It’s a fair introduction to special agent Gavin Clark, as he sweats through his shirt driving a rental car for yet another government mission. Although his job is pretty extraordinary—investigating unidentified anomalous phenomena—it’s actually pretty mundane and tiring to do this much traveling.

When Gavin actually meets Dr. Mikayla Johnson, the NASA astrophysicist is openly hostile to his point of view. This is the first time we see their clashing perspectives on what’s out there. Gavin is focused entirely on national security, and his instinct is to pull the trigger first and ask questions later.

What Gavin doesn’t know is that the entity has been speaking to Mikayla through the augmented reality glasses she wears to treat her face blindness. Gavin is frightened of first contact, but Mikayla is intrigued, excited, and can’t wait to meet whatever-it-is.

On the next few pages, things are about to get crazy as they realize the object has changed course and is headed toward earth at an incredible rate of speed. Once it lands in Spiro, Oklahoma, they’ll meet a local man named Jim Hardgray and the whole rest of this incredible adventure will unfold.

Visit Daniel Wilson's website.

My Book, The Movie: A Boy and His Bot.

The Page 69 Test: Robopocalypse.

My Book, The Movie: Amped.

The Page 69 Test: Robogenesis.

My Book, The Movie: Robogenesis.

Writers Read: Daniel H. Wilson (June 2014).

--Marshal Zeringue

"House of Hearts"

Skyla Arndt has always loved the creepy, crawly side of life. When she was younger, she thought that love might translate to hunting Bigfoot, but luckily for him, writing proved easier. These days, you can catch her writing stories by candlelight, splurging on candles for her office, and continuing to keep an eye out for Bigfoot (because you never know). She lives with her husband and three cats by the perpetually frozen Great Lakes.

Arndt applied the Page 69 Test to her new novel, House of Hearts, and reported the following:

From page 69:

She’s a stray gust of wind down the corridor, her body so paper thin that she breezes forward without the slightest sound. I’m hypnotized by the arch of her heels and the sway of her tiptoes inches off the floor.

We enter a deserted parlor room, and the candles flicker upon our arrival. Velvet curtains billow down from the ceiling and sensuously frame a matching set of oxblood leather armchairs.

Beyond them, a fireplace sits untouched, the logs blackened behind an iron grate. Oleander Lockwell hangs like an omnipresent god above the mantle. In this painting, the gray strands from Sutherland Hall have won the battle; they dominate his hair and the fringes of his beard. He’s stern-faced and harsh in the low lighting, painted in the violent strokes of a hurried artist who couldn’t get away fast enough.

Emoree doesn’t spare the man a parting glance. Her attention is reserved for an object on an end table, her finger tracing a careful pattern in the air as she studies it. She breaks away the moment I get close and I can’t help it, my curiosity gets the best of me. I pick up what turns out to be a wooden labyrinth, a perfect miniature of the hedge maze outside. I brush my thumb across the careful ridges and chart the same path she did, starting in the clearing in the center to the exit, but I feel no residual warmth in her wake.

I don’t feel any warmth at all.

The body heat in the ballroom is a distant memory. What I’m left with is an icy pocket of frigid air. My breath clouds the late summer air, and I marvel at the ghost of it leaving my lips. It shouldn’t be this cold in here, but then again, Emoree shouldn’t be here.

I honestly didn’t know what to expect! I was 99% sure that I would randomly flip to this page and have nothing to show for it, but I was pleasantly surprised. Not only is this one of my favorite scenes in the book, but the passage perfectly encapsulates the heart of House of Hearts (pun intended). House of Hearts centers around a girl enrolling in a private academy to follow in the footsteps of her dead best friend–and on page 69, you see my MC, Violet, literally following her dead BFF’s footsteps. Only a couple pages prior, Violet Harper had been dancing in the school masquerade ball when she spotted a horrifyingly familiar face in the crowd: the unmasked, spitting image of her friend, Emoree. Readers jumping to this spot in the book will find Violet trailing after Emoree’s ghost as if spellbound.

Beyond that, I think it gives a great sense for the type of atmosphere you will find in the book. What says spooky dark academia more than a ghost leading you out of a haunted ballroom into an abandoned study?

Visit Skyla Arndt's website.

Writers Read: Skyla Arndt.

Q&A with Skyla Arndt.

My Book, The Movie: House of Hearts.

--Marshal Zeringue

"For No Mortal Creature"

Keshe Chow (she/her) is a Sunday Times bestselling author of fantasy, romance, and speculative fiction. Born in Malaysia, Chow moved to Australia when she was two years old. Her debut novel, The Girl with No Reflection, won the 2022 Victorian Premier's Literature Awards Prize for an Unpublished Manuscript and was shortlisted in the 2025 ABIA awards. Her new YA fantasy is For No Mortal Creature. Currently she resides in Naarm (Melbourne) with her husband, two kids, one cat, and way too many house plants.

Chow applied the Page 69 Test to For No Mortal Creature and shared the following:

From page 69:

He shot me a wary look, and I stared back, belligerent. What was he doing here? Why had he interrupted the physician? I was still trying to untangle his motives, when I was startled by a choked-off cry. This was followed by a strange gurgling noise. Something heavy landed on my legs.

Prince Essien’s eyes flared wide, and slowly, he turned his head. I raised my head, too. Only to see Larch slumped face down across my legs, blood soaking into the eiderdown, and—

Lin, standing behind him, holding that curved, bright-blue blade.

For a moment, I could only stare at his spectral body in shock. Then, the prince’s mouth dropped open, and I quaked. Scrambling up, the pulse in my ears thundering, I shoved the deadweight of Larch’s body off me. The corpse slid sideways and landed on the floor with an unceremonious thud.

“Careful, girl,” growled a voice, and I startled to see Larch’s ghost staring down at his dead body, frowning. He raised his gaze, piercing me with his disapproval. “You should respect the dead!”

Not stopping to answer him, I swung my legs off the bed and jumped to my feet. Essien Lancaster was staring down at the body of the now-dead physician. The prince’s face was puce, the muscles in his neck corded with tension. He’d lost the usual easy grace of his stance and was trembling with shock.

Lin’s face, on the other hand, was impassive. Almost smirking. I took in the entire scene within a mere fraction of a second. And then I noticed Lin, with the tiniest, most minute of movements, adjusting the grip of his knife. So subtly no one would notice.

No one but me, who knew him well. Or had known him well, once.

He drew back his arm to slash at the prince. For some reason, something within me snapped.

I think that this does capture many of the major elements of For No Mortal Creature. Namely, that there is death and evidence of Lin as being a morally gray character capable of murder. We have evidence of a ghost—that of the murdered man’s, who speaks directly to the main character and asks her to respect his corpse.

However, the aspect that this excerpt does not highlight is the romance that features in the book. The angst-filled romances between the main character, Jia Yi, and the ex-lover who betrayed her, Lin, are a huge driver of the story. Similarly, a burgeoning and tenuous alliance between Jia Yi and Prince Essien is also a significant part of the plot.

Lastly, this excerpt doesn’t highlight the main motivator for Jia Yi, the main character. The biggest thing driving her throughout the entire book is her desperation to save her dying grandmother, who isn’t mentioned on this page.

For No Mortal Creature is a dark, gothic young adult fantasy about a world where ghosts can die and become ghosts of ghosts. Jia Yi, a girl who possesses the gift of resurrection, must delve into the many layers of the afterlife to save her grandmother. However, to succeed, she must team up with her two mortal (and immortal) enemies: the ghost of Lin, the boy who once betrayed her; and the cold, enigmatic Prince Essien Lancaster.

Visit Keshe Chow's website.

Q&A with Keshe Chow.

--Marshal Zeringue

"Call of the Camino"

Suzanne Redfearn is the #1 Amazon and USA Today bestselling author of eight novels: Call of the Camino, Two Good Men, Where Butterflies Wander, Moment In Time, Hadley & Grace, In an Instant, No Ordinary Life, and Hush Little Baby. Her books have been translated into twenty-seven languages and have been recognized by RT Reviews, Target Recommends, Goodreads, Publisher’s Marketplace, and Kirkus Reviews. She has been awarded Best New Fiction from Best Book Awards and has been a Goodreads Choice Awards Finalist.

Born and raised on the east coast, Redfearn moved to California when she was fifteen. Currently, she lives in Laguna Beach with her husband where they own Lumberyard Restaurant. In addition to being an author, Redfearn is an architect specializing in residential and commercial design. When not writing, she enjoys doing anything and everything with her family—skiing, golf, tennis, pickleball, hiking, board games, and watching reality TV. She is an avid baseball fan. Her team is the Angels.

Redfearn applied the Page 69 Test to Call of the Camino with the following results:

I have always loved this test for how well it works. For whatever reason, page sixty-nine always seems to be highly indicative of what is at the heart of the story, and applying the Page 69 Test to Call of the Camino was no exception.

On page sixty-nine, Isabelle, one of the two protagonists, meets the love of her life, Peter, who she doesn’t know is the love of her life at the time, but their friendship and eventual romance is what will drive her storyline from that point forward. She also happens to meet him in a cathedral, where she is praying for the loss of two friends, and her relationship with her faith is also central to her journey.

Opening the book to page sixty-nine would give a reader a good sense of one of the underlying, driving forces of one of the two storylines. But since Call of the Camino is about two journeys along the path of St. James, it only gives a glimpse at half the book. It also does not show any of the Camino de Santiago, which is the backbone of the story. I think a reader might mistakenly believe, based on that single page, that the story is a romance and not the story of two women’s transformative journeys along an ancient, legendary trail told a generation apart.

Call of the Camino was inspired by my own experience walking the Camino de Santiago, a five-hundred-mile pilgrimage across Spain, and the characters were inspired by the amazing people I met along the way.

Visit Suzanne Redfearn's website, and follow her on Facebook, Instagram, and Threads.

Coffee with a Canine: Suzanne Redfearn and Cooper.

My Book, The Movie: Hush Little Baby.

The Page 69 Test: Hush Little Baby.

The Page 69 Test: No Ordinary Life.

Writers Read: Suzanne Redfearn (February 2016).

My Book, The Movie: No Ordinary Life.

My Book, The Movie: In an Instant.

The Page 69 Test: In an Instant.

Q&A with Suzanne Redfearn.

My Book, The Movie: Hadley and Grace.

The Page 69 Test: Hadley & Grace.

Writers Read: Suzanne Redfearn (March 2022).

The Page 69 Test: Moment in Time.

My Book, The Movie: Moment in Time.

Writers Read: Suzanne Redfearn (February 2024).

Writers Read: S. E. Redfearn (October 2024).

The Page 69 Test: Two Good Men.

Writers Read: Suzanne Redfearn (October 2025).

My Book, The Movie: Call of the Camino.

--Marshal Zeringue