Saturday, September 13, 2025

"Everything We Could Do"

David McGlynn's books include the memoirs One Day You'll Thank Me and A Door in the Ocean, and the story collection The End of the Straight and Narrow. His work has appeared in The New York Times, The Washington Post, and The American Scholar. He teaches at Lawrence University and lives in Madison, Wisconsin.

McGlynn applied the Page 69 Test to his debut novel, Everything We Could Do, and reported the following:
Everything We Could Do is largely -- though not entirely -- set in a hospital, specifically in a neonatal intensive care unit that cares for premature and critically ill newborn children. I've been fascinated by the NICU for years: not only was my youngest son a NICU patient, but my wife worked as a NICU social worker for close to a decade. The babies treated in NICUs are quite often unfathomably small and live at what Diana Fei calls "the edge of life": too small to survive without intensive medical intervention. Yet life, it turns out, is a powerful force and medical advancements have learned how to treat, nurture, and incubate many of these tiny human beings until they're strong enough to live in the world. It's harrowing and frightening and redemptive and miraculous all at once.

Page 69 is the opening of Chapter 5. The protagonists of the story, Brooke and Harper Jensen, have been holding vigil beside their preemies' beds for several weeks -- long enough for initial shock to wear off and for them to learn the idiosyncrasies of the place. A mother arrives at the unit with her baby, not for treatment, but to visit the nurses and doctor who cared for him. The nurses, however, don't remember him, at least not at first, and instead pretend to marvel over his size and progress. Harper Jensen sees this artificial display of exuberance as an insult, and then as a sign that the baby must not have been in the unit for very long. On the next page -- page 70 -- the reader learns that's not the case. The baby boy was very premature, and sick, and required an unforeseen surgery to live. But in the months since he's left the NICU, he's grown -- a lot. The nurses don't recognize him not because they're callous or cold, but because he's healthy and thriving.

Everything We Could Do tries to present a realistic view of a world few people ever see or even know about. It was important to me to not turn away from the most difficult experiences, to bear witness to them. But throughout the novel are moments like the one found on page 69, in which rays of light and hope poke through, and the characters get glimpses of possible happy endings. It helps them to keep going, and (I hope) adds a little levity to a deadly serious world.
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