Redfearn applied the Page 69 Test to Two Good Men and reported the following:
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Page 69 for Two Good Men starts with:“Doesn’t matter how much time passes,” she says. “Those we lose linger in our souls.”What a wonderful start to the test!
Two Good Men is a story of two men on a quest for justice on opposite sides of the law. The scene on page sixty-nine is from FBI agent Steve Patterson’s perspective. Steve is a bereaved father who made it his mission to protect the rights of released felons after his son was killed by a vigilante mother who targeted the wrong person. In this scene, Steve is conducting an interview with the neighbor of a felon whose sudden death is suspicious.
Dee has also experienced deep, irretractable grief, and Steve is deeply affected by the conversation. Dee goes on to explain why she is not sorry her neighbor is gone. The man, Otis Parsons, had vowed vengeance against Dee for the testimony she gave twelve years earlier that put him behind bars, and he had made it clear that he planned to exact that revenge by hurting Dee’s eleven-year-old son.“And what would you have done if he hadn’t died?” Steve asked.This is a great representation of the novel, of the tug of war between good and evil, right and wrong, and justice and vengeance.
She shakes her head. “I don’t know. Seriously, I don’t.” He hears the distress in her voice. “I prayed every night for an answer.” She lifts her green eyes to his. “And it seems God was listening.”
Steve doesn’t know about the Almighty taking heed of her plea, but he fully believes someone did.
“So you were relieved when you found out he was dead?” he asks.
Her gaze unflinching, defiantly she says, “More than relieved. Happy. Ecstatic. I celebrated. I grabbed my son, and we danced around the room.”
He nods in understanding, swallows the last of his cookie then asks almost casually, “And did you have anything to do with his death?”
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