He applied the Page 69 Test to Kind of Blue, his first novel, and reported the following:
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A cold, rosy dawn in southern Lebanon. I’m part of a three-man patrol hidden behind a boulder on a rocky promontory. Three Hezbollah guerrillas wearing flowing keffiyehs, aiming Kalashnikovs, pop up on a ridge behind us. A fourth guerrilla is about to pull the plug on a grenade. I swing around, I aim my Gallil at him, but the assault rifle jams. The two other soldiers shout to me: “Esh!” Shoot. But the gun is still jammed. “Esh! Esh! Esh!”This gives the reader a good sense of the book and the protagonist. As you can tell from the dream, Ash served in a paratrooper unit of the Israel Defense Forces, and he’s still plagued by nightmares and flashbacks.
Ring! Ring! Ring! I jumped out of bed and reached for my phone. “Hello,” I said groggily.
“Are you naked?” someone asked in a falsetto voice.
“Who is this?”
I recognized the voice. It was Sergeant Walker of the Harbor Division buy team.
“We just rounded up a passel of ho’s, in addition to some crackheads, junkies, and street-corner dealers. A couple might have something for you.”
“I’m on my way,” I said.
I think the dialogue also is representative of the book.
When I was a crime reporter for the Los Angeles Times, and when I researched two nonfiction books about LAPD homicide detectives, I paid close attention to the way cops talked. I tried to write realistic dialogue in Kind of Blue. Most homicide detectives joke around a lot. This is a coping mechanism. If they don’t have a sense of humor, I discovered, they burn out quickly and don’t last long in homicide.
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