She applied the Page 69 Test to Sima’s Undergarments for Women, her first novel, and reported the following:
This page 69 business is brilliant. I opened Sima's Undergarments for Women to the assigned spot and read:Read an excerpt from Sima's Undergarments for Women, and learn more about the book and author at Ilana Stanger-Ross' website.… father at the kitchen table while she opened drawers and overturned sofa pillows, searching for her mother’s treasures. Her father wrung his hands, agitated, as he lamented that he’d never thought to ask where she hid her jewelry—the cheap gold, imitation diamond trinkets he’d bought her during their decades together. Sima found them finally in a tallis bag at the back of her mother’s closet, hidden behind a pair of violet heels.It's the writer's job to ensure that every page is essential, but this one seems especially important. When Sima takes that money – for the first time, she feels that her mother, who she has just buried, really did love her.
Curled against the costume jewelry was a worn envelope containing two thousand dollars cash.
“I knew she put away what she could, now and then,” her father said, “but I never knew she’d saved much.” He lifted the bills, his hands as gentle as if it were his wife’s own weight he held, and, cradling them, looked at Sima.
….. Her father took her hand, placed the money in her palm. “This money belonged to her; she’d want it to be yours.”
Sima closed her hand around the soft bills.
Later in the novel, she's not so sure. But that money helps her to start her business: the Sima's Undergarments for Women of the title.
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